Mountain bike Haiku

by Matt | June 2, 2010 | Filed under Bike talk, Stuff & nonsense | 11 replies so far

Sunrise on the hills
Sees a girl doing yoga.
I ride past, smiling.

One day I’ll manage an epic poem about my tyre choice but I need to work up to that one!

For the curious, you can read about the Japanese Haiku form on Wikipedia!

Thanks for reading,
Matt


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  1. June 2, 2010 at 5:51 am

    Paul901 says:

    Off the back once more

    Moles ride into the distance

    Is the cake stop near?

  2. June 2, 2010 at 7:06 am

    kc says:

    The falling flower

    I saw drift back to the branch

    was a butterfly.

    Translation by kc

    The falling mole

    I saw drift back to the peleton

    was a bonking mess

    OK, OK I know it doesn’t have the simple beauty of the original! Best get back to the day job!

  3. June 2, 2010 at 9:22 am

    DaveW says:

    The Hope hub’s clicking

    Quickens to a whir

    As the hill steepens

  4. June 2, 2010 at 10:17 am

    Dave says:

    Rotation is high

    Singlespeed and rigid too

    Pure and Simplistic

  5. June 2, 2010 at 11:38 am

    John R says:

    Matt’s found a dropoff

    Can’t ride that it’s way too steep

    Oh my god ahhhhhhhh splat!

  6. June 2, 2010 at 11:54 am

    AndAndy says:

    How to write haiku?

    What can provide clarity?

    One ‘on’ for On One?

  7. June 2, 2010 at 12:03 pm

    Andy661 says:

    the one above is mine.

    Damned auto complete on my phone!

    🙂

  8. June 2, 2010 at 1:04 pm

    D'AndyC says:

    The bike trail steepens,

    Mighty thighs push down strongly,

    A chain ring explodes

  9. June 2, 2010 at 1:34 pm

    DaveW says:

    Face red and sweating

    Exertion, pain, distant thunder

    Damn brussel sprout curry

  10. June 3, 2010 at 12:56 pm

    Muddymoles says:

    Ride report: Wednesday 2 June – Crunch

    Another enjoyable ride across the Surrey Hills is otherwise marred by a nasty fall for Keith

  11. June 24, 2010 at 8:29 pm

    paul901 says:

    Solstice a success

    Three wise men enjoy the dawn

    Virgins absent, damn!

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